Sunshine, you want me, but, sunshine, you can't see me. You aren't the only sunshine, figuratively speaking. Yet you seem the most beautiful.
Sunshine, you too hurt me, yet, sunshine, you help keep me living.
Please name another sunshine that radiates like you do. Tell me of the sunshine that's golden on long days like you.
The sunshine shows me, and the sunshine's not prose. This sunshine leaves me thirsty, this sunshine doesn't feel too strong. That sunshine holds me, and that sunshine does more than shakecomfort me."
The writing above is one of my poems, but I've been stumped on a title idea for quite a while now. "Sunshine," isn't quite what I want, but I want it to be pretty simple like that. My inspiration for this piece pretty much halted after I wrote it though, so there wasn't any further inspiration or anything for its title. I need one but want some meaning/reasoning behind it. If anyone has any ideas or anything, please let me know and give me some reason or inspiration or something to support it, please! Feedback is much appreciated!
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